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[ryanmcnally]

First off, thank you for the feed on mine, it's much appreciated. The beat definitely elevates around the 0:47 mark with the vocal sample and synth melody. As a hook pattern that is definitely dope. The main piano melody is really super melodic and melancholy as well - nice chops if that's a sample. I could hear a lot of different rappers rockin over this. Kinda fits an Eminem type beat imo

 

[BeatbyAS]

Pros
- Intro
- loudness
- drums

Cons
-lack of melody variation

keep up the work, shit seems to go well for you.

 

[d1gd33p]

like said before ... melody could use another vairation or a break down some where along the beat ... keep it up good work


check me out https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-south-etc/weird-wired-soul-child-f4f-501502/

 

[RiLLMTM]

This is very very good... i can vibe out to this all day but i would use another kick drum personally somethin smooth more pillow and not so hard style (EDM)... still this is a great production bro...
Check my lastest here https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-etc/100-yearz-up-tempo-trap-f4f-asap-501641/

 

[xivdyn]

piano is dope as is the choppy synth over it in the intro. i agree the kick could be softer to better compliment the vibe. vocal samples are ill too. good work man.

 

[Finnis Music]

a few changes and drops here and there will take it to the next level. Overall dope ...especially feeling the piano.

Please Provide HONEST Feedback - 1st Attempt @ Mixing My Own Instrumentals

 

[Bennbeats]

This is a great beat man! I love the piano melody's..
And those voice samples are awesome.. really like the vibe!

Check me out if you can
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...w-game-documentary-pt-2-type-beat-f4f-501697/

 

[French Player]

The piano at the beginning is very beautiful. The mix sounds very good too. But I don't like your drums. I mean, it's not very catchy, you know what I'm saying? I think this piano song deserve a better drums loops. But overall it's nice, the sound quality is good, it's peacefull. Nice work.

Come to see me. I need feedback too:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...h-etc/hip-hop-beat-good-morning-f-4-f-501759/